Oral presentation about my day, my week and my weekend

1.Presentation:
   I don't use any recurse in the video.
   I spend about 2 minutes.
2.Body llanguage:
   I look the people but sometimes I was swining because i was so nervous
   I don't read.
3.Structure:
   I organize my ideas well.
4.Content:
   The information it was correct.
5.Language:
   The grammar is coorect.
    I repeat much of words.
6.Phonetics:
    I pronounced most of the words properly.
    I stop 2 times in a sentence.

My final mark is: 5